Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk


Uming safety in numbers What could go wrongThis was an interesting concept but the writing was undeniably amateurish In it s favor I didn t see a single typo and there was only one editing anomaly in the whole book but the suspense fell flat the sentence structure while technically fine lacked finesse and the surreal scenes near the end became repetitive to the point of impatienceNot a bad effort for a beginning writer who might develop his skills by reading some of the greats in the genre This is actually closer to who might develop his skills by reading some of the greats in the genre This is actually closer to 35 than a 4There are many floors of thought surrounding my take on Floor FourFloor One The author did a wonderful job at establishing the tone of the work The narration felt #like a conversation at times which made this work easy to readFloor Two #a conversation at times which made this work easy to readFloor Two work did present some characters that were easy to like such as Jake and characters ou loved to hate like Doug In addition it presented some characters Sculpting Making a Toddler Doll you were on the fence about like Kyle and Brandon and those elements made me want to find out Side Hallway I kept wanting to call this work Fourth FloorNow let s go a bit higherFloor Three There was a whole lot of repetition of certain situations and phrases that took some of the swipe out of the sickle ifou will I picked up that Coleman aka The Mangler was a bad ass from the beginning and I don t think that element needed to be repeated by characters in the narrative Let the character act let the killing do the work Also the parts where Doug was desperately seeking truth from Brandon were a bit of overkillFloor Four I was seeking a bit cohesiveness depth in plot in the connection not only between Jake and the Mangler but also with Brandon s interaction with him For me just the sight doesn t uite hold full water I was looking for an additional twist to come out like way back when Jake and the Mangler were related or something Or that the Mangler s interest in Brandon went deeper than the whole bargaining chip angle It just seemed as if something was really missing Also the kills were rather predictableFinal SweepIf Soldados del Multiverso: Guerreros del pasado (Guerras del Multiverso n 2) you are a person who is looking for very detailed storyline with twists and turns many instances of blood and gore great unpredictability and a read that will leaveou looking around to see if the killer is in the room with On Disgust you I d have to say Pass This work isn t for someone who is seasoned in horror reads or very rich psychological thrillersHoweverIfou are new to horror like slight mind benders and not too much gore then Floor Four will be a pleasing read to A Dirty Wedding Night: A Dirty Rockstar Romance Collection (Dirty, Book 2.5) you For me this work had uite aoung adult feel to it and mild psych than anything horro. Unted fourth floor Jake must keep everyone out and protect them from the true evil that lurks on Floor Four while Brandon falls deeper into the Mangler’s supernatural worldIf New Menopausal Years you likeour scares with a twist of the twilight zone then Faja (Naslouchač, you’ll love Floor Four’s take on the supernaturalGrabour free copy and walk the haunted halls tod. ,


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A loud bang was heard from above scaring the boys They shined their lights up the stairwell The sounds of chains rattling on the floor stirred the dust above Something or someone was up there Doug hiding his fear took a couple of steps up Brandon and Kyle looked at him their feet locked in place They had no intention of going any further A tale of horror with a twist of the Twilight Zone The old abandoned Saint Vincent Hospital is said to be haunted by the ghost of David Vincent Hospital is said to be haunted by the ghost of David Coleman the notorious serial killer known as The Mangler Coleman died on the fourth floor after being shot by police For the three Jr High boys their curiosity gets the best of them as they explore the old hospital despite Old Man Jake s warning No one knew of Jake s dark connection to the killer and the hospital And now on the anniversary of The Mangler s death a group of high school kids are planning a private party on the haunted fourth floor Jake must keep everyone out and protect them from the true evil that lurks on Floor Four I absolutely loved the plot of this story mainly because it was a horror story that surrounded the death of a serial killer who was pretty much haunting an old abandoned hospital The writing was not the best I have ever read but it was doable It had great pacing so it did flow very well so it made it a very uick read For the most part it was an interesting tale There were some creepy parts and also I found it to be somewhat trippy as well so ou did not realize what was actually real and what was not I think that added to the story but may be annoying to some readersThe characters were ok I guess I did not really relate to any of them David Henry Coleman otherwise known as The Mangler our serial killer in uestion was an interesting character but I didn t really feel like i found out why he was like he found out why he was like he so that is a big chunk missing to the story I really wanted to know about it and just did not get thatThis book is definitely a plot driven book rather than a character driven plot I feel like the author could have done a lot with the story It is worth the read though since there are plenty of creepy parts to the story along with the trippy parts as well An old abandoned asylum is boarded up to keep curiosity seekers out because rumor has it that the ghost of a maniacal serial killer who died there still haunts the fourth floor To add to the urban legends a workman was found hanging on that floor A caretaker with a personal interest in the case tries to keep teenagers out on the anniversary of the killer s death but the teenagers are determined to have a party there ass. By police For Brandon and his friends their curiosity gets the best of them as they explore the dark halls despite ‘Old Man’ Jake’s warnings No one knows of Jake’s past connection to the serial killer and the hospitalNow on the anniversary of The Mangler’s death a group of high school kids are planning a private party on the ha. This was not a bad short story Kept Me Interested Painfully Bad Writing Takes me interested Painfully bad writing takes could have been a fun little ghost story and turns it into a drudgery Written in a very passive voice with a handful of spelling and grammatical errors thrown in for good measure this book is short but seriously poorly executed Bad Really grammatical errors thrown in for good measure this book is short but seriously poorly executed Bad Really truly bad The problem with this short story was that it had too many characters that the reader would become lost if she wasn t paying any attention I liked the plot but it was not properly delivered to the readers An old man name Jake loved to tell the neighborhood kids scary stories His favorite one was about the old abandoned Saint Vincent Hospital and the serial killer called the mangler The mangler died on the 4th floor after being shot by police It is said that David Henry Colemanthe manglerhaunts the 4th floor of The Saint Vincent Jake would tell the neighborhood kids to stay away from the hospital They did not take his warning seriously The anniversary of the man Not for seasoned horror readers Perhaps a good start for pre teens getting into horror maybe but very b grade In fact it reminded me of something that would have been written by primary school kids with that clich d setting and clunky and meandering prose that never really captured the suspense or built any atmosphere Sorry but I didn t enjoy this one at all I will be back and I will return and kill again and again I will haunt this place forever Anyone who sees me must dieThis is of a plot driven story focusing on the telling and not the action Has a good concept combining a serial killer returning as a supernatural evil entity I can t say this has anything in it that amps up the scare factor As a long time reader of great horror I know what it takes to As a long time reader of great horror I know what it takes to scare me I really didn t even feel like this was focused on a haunting so focused on the killing After reading horror for well over 40 ears it takes a lot to make my spine tingle I do not think the author did himself any favors by dubbing the serial killer in his novella as The Mangler It was inevitable that it brought to mind the most excellent short story of that name by Stephen King Now that was a tale to twitch our innards Although the freebie download is much appreciated this one is best left to oungsters who are new to the genre In my opinion there I read this book for the Read Your E reader read a thon I have had it for a little while and decided it would be great for this I did not know what to expect since this is a first time read of this author but knowing it was a horror was a definite plus for me Synopsis. An old abandoned hospital haunted by the ghost of a serial killer A group of friends too curious for their own good An old man hiding a secretThe old and vacant Saint Vincent Hospital is said to be haunted by the ghost of David Henry Coleman the notorious serial killer known as The Mangler Coleman died on the fourth floor after being shot. Floor Four


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    Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk Free read Floor Four After reading horror for well over 40 years it takes a lot to make my spine tingle I do not think the author did himself any favors by dubbing the serial killer in his novella as The Mangler It was inevitable that it brought to mind the most excellent short story of that name by Stephen King Now that was a tale to twitch your innards Although the freebie download is much appreciated this one is best left to youngsters who are new

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    Free read Floor Four Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk An old man name Jake loved to tell the neighborhood kids scary stories His favorite one was about the old abandoned Saint Vincent Hospital and the serial killer called the mangler The mangler died on the 4th floor after being shot by police It is said that David Henry Colemanthe manglerhaunts the 4th floor of The Saint Vincent Jake would tell the neighborhood kids to stay away from the hospital They did not take his warning seriously The an

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    Free read Floor Four Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk A. Lopez Jr. º 5 Read This was not a bad short story Kept me interested

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    Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk Not for seasoned horror readers Perhaps a good start for pre teens getting into horror maybe but very b grade? In fact it reminded me of something that would have been written by primary school kids with that clichéd setting and clunky and mea

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    Free read ð PDF, eBook or Kindle ePUB free º A. Lopez Jr. A. Lopez Jr. º 5 Read Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk Painfully bad writing takes what could have been a fun little ghost story and turns it into a drudgery Written i

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    A. Lopez Jr. º 5 Read Free read ð PDF, eBook or Kindle ePUB free º A. Lopez Jr. Free read Floor Four An old abandoned asylum is boarded up to keep curiosity seekers out because rumor has it that the ghost of a maniacal serial killer who died there still haunts the fourth floor To add to the urban legends a workman was found hanging on that floor A caretaker with a personal interest in the case tries to keep teen

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    Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk I will be back and I will return and kill again and again I will haunt this place forever Anyone who sees me must dieThis is of a plot driven story focusing on the telling and not the action Has a good concept c

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    Read Epub Floor Four ↠ A. Lopez Jr. – steamlite.co.uk The problem with this short story was that it had too many characters that the reader would become lost if she wasn't paying any attention I liked the plot but it was not properly delivered to the readers

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    A. Lopez Jr. º 5 Read Free read ð PDF, eBook or Kindle ePUB free º A. Lopez Jr. Free read Floor Four This is actually closer to a 35 than a 4There are many floors of thought surrounding my take on Floor FourFloor One The author did a wonderful job at establishing the tone of the work The narration felt like a conversation at times which made this work easy to readFloor Two The work did present some characters t

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