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felt real sympathy for Bryan doing what he thought was right and I can honestly real sympathy for Bryan doing what he thought was right and I can honestly I nderstood WHY he acted the way he did Bryan comes over as very nsure of hi Enjoyable short story good writing and I loved the pic and prompt Many thanks to the author for participating in the Love s Landscapes event This was lovely even given a few issues with the writing it
still enough a full on 4Like An Old Fashioned Love Song this story features recognisable realistic BDSM with recognisable real people as the Top and bottom And like nearly every other recognisable and realistic BDSM story out there this gets downrated and downtalked for being too sweet no proper BDSM and too fluffyWhen I look at such completely zany reactions as those I read regarding this story I get all ragey over the fact that by now BDSM and kink are so tterly misrepresented to romance readers by a bazillion writers not knowing the first things about it that these readers end Enticed By You (by You, up calling realistic renditions of BDSM out for beingnrealistic or fluffy God beware where do we end if lifestylers manage to have some fun without torturing each other into PTSD or show some common sense and decency Can t have that now can we Well newsflash this was a very realistic BDSM story For once the TPE aspect as well was treated as it should be namely valid only ntil one party decides it s over This happens often in real life than you d think if all you do is read romance novels I know many many subs and doms who simply walk out of a relationship because it doesn t work BDSM isn t better in that respect than vanilla because it sure as hell doesn t cure the problems arising in ANY relationship It s just a different expression of itAs such it was refreshing to read here the reflections of both dom and expression of itAs such it was refreshing to read here the reflections of both dom and about play which clearly went wrong and which overstepped boundaries which in reality is by the way far worse than people seem to think It dealt with errors made by the dom also happens often than you d think in a manner that I ve seen play out before me if both parties are lucky that isI had niggles with the writing per se there were plotholes and the prose needed showing and less telling This author needs experience and a good demanding betaeditor to work with Which is why I didn t give it 5However BDSM wise and as a peek at relationship dynamics this was lovely and well observed Not even 150 years ago people duelled over what we today consider minor slights received in public in front of witnesses There were duels as recently as 1967 in France for instance again over public humiliation There have been several recent suicides over public humiliation eg outing people as gay publishing photos or videos of them So anyone who considers nwanted humiliation in front of friends and one s peers as something which is of no conseuence really needs to get their value systems straightened out again Public humiliation is a severe injury and most definitely cannot be part of BDSM play when it isn t agreed to Dear MA JacksonI would send At an intense tennis camp where they are not allowed to have any contact with anyone except for emergencies The camp ends next week Friday will he come back to me or by humiliating him did I lose him for good I love him Please write this story and let him know I love himPhoto Description A young man stands facing a wooden privacy fence arms raised behind his head He wears a flipped sun visor no shirt and his white shorts are pulled low exposing his muscled back and tanned bottomThis story was written as a part of the MM Roman. .was still enough
review Sorry is the Magic Word.
Nice prompt and image but the execution
was a mess This story was a lot of things but not BDSM Both men acted likea mess This story was a lot of things but not BDSM Both men acted like I didn t see a Dom and sub here I saw two idiots Writing was okay but there was no plot and the MCs were one dimensional The incide This was an enjoyable change of pace the two MCs spend 99% of the story apart as they reflect on their relationship and communication I wouldn t want every story I read to be like this but once in a while it s nice 35 stars Okay ish Too much telling versus showing It looked to me the men wanted somewhat different things from their relationship Let me explainNo There is too much Let me sum Firing Schedules for Glass - The Kiln Companion up Inigo MMisunderstandings poor planning and acting before thinking I have a hard time enjoying stories based on miscommunication Add in the retrospective chunk of time that predominates the story and we endp spending only a few paragraphs at the beginning and a few at the end with the characters actually occupying the same space I just had a difficult time connecting with the characters and their relationship On the Adam and the Ants upside I liked the mentoringsupport aspect to Dylan and Bryan s community Okay It s been a stressful day but I really want to write this review so forgive me if it endsp being a bit scrappy First off The prompt is very specific and somewhat constraining and kudos to M A Jackson for fulfilling it so well I particularly liked the BDSM Lite tagThe start of the story is lovely showing Les Carnets de Cerise T3 - Le Dernier des cinq trsors us just howpset and angry Dylan is over his treatment Great dialogue here Fucked Return to Doomstar (Doomstar 2) up big time Bryan So Bryan has humiliated Dylan and now realises what a mess he has made of their relationship The description of the backyard after the party isnderstated and yet so sad in a way a sense of emptiness after what was not long before a cheerful noisy munch with friends Now the empty backyard seems to mock Bryan as he stand there wondering what he has done wrongAnd that is the beauty of this story Bryan really doesn t know I wonder if this is the first munch Dylan and he have hosted That would explain their reactions Bryan trying too hard maybe too wrapped Language - A Student Handbook on Key Topics and Theories up in trying to impress his friends to actually think the whole situation through and Dylan messing about for the same reason Dylan was as much at fault for not saying no and simply tolerating the punishment without protest even though Bryan knew he hated it I love the reality of this situation Two people still learning stillnsure neither wanting to let the other or their friends down and both getting it oh so wrong Mistakes on all sides Bryan for humiliating Dylan without permission in a situation where Dylan really had no choice if he was not to embarrass his dom Dylan for getting into the situation in the first place especially if this WAS their first time hosting a munch and the friends for not having iet word with the pair of them and making it something they could all laugh about There is a little too much telling eg Marshall had mentored Bryan when he and Dylan had joined but we are made aware that Bryan and Dylan Dear AuthorI am a Dom who blew it with my boy; see the picture and you will see I sent him to the corner for punishment out in my backyard Unfortunately when I did that some friends of mine and some of his friends were there also for a BB party After the party was over he left and it has been five days He isn’t with any of his friends or his family and I am worried I have tried calling him emailing him and texting him but no response I finally got a clue I remembered him telling me about a chance to be a counselor and trainer.
view might be different than others It is possible to have TPE without the humiliation aspect Gillibrand from Fun Dick and Shane is in a TPE relationship and he is not purposely humiliated and that is a true story Your story sounds really sweet to me actually like the dom actually thinks about his sub as a human being capable of emotions There are times for total dominance and submission and times when exhibiting that may not be appropriate I thought I could read your story but I don t think I can after all I have a heard time with TPE andyour view might be different than others It is possible to have TPE without the humiliation aspect Gillibrand from Fun
I especially don t like it when it involves humiliation atespecially don t like it when it involves humiliation at that s the only reason I m not reading it I want to thank you again for donating your time energy and creative spirit to Love s Landscapes and I hope you keep writing You will continue to improve and hone your skills as you go Most popular writers started out with bad reviews I fear I need to stop reading BDSM stories or I ll throw my laptop one dayview spoiler The punishment in the beginning was than deserved so I really don t see what the fuss is about and the Dom warned his sub about the whole thing Humiliated him As if all Bryan did was doing his job as Dylan s Dom And how Dylan acts in the end Like a spoilt brat A sub like him He needs a cock cage daily spankings boundaries so tight he gasps for air and a Dom that really shows him his place My Master would not have been so forgiving hide spoiler I didn t like this story but I am giving it 4 stars for the writing I think the author did a good job and my problem was with the prompt than the writing The prompt sounded alright But reading it over it places far too much blame on the Dom And the author did to eualize the blame than the prompt And I think the author did a moderately good job writing a relationship a BDSM world and some concept of BDSM I don t totally agree with her concept but realistic than a lot of BDSM writing And there weren t noticeable flaws in writingI could imagine a sub acting the way Dylan acted And a Dom does have a responsibility not to push their sub too far And to talk to them before ending a scene This was a major failure of communication However the sub also has a responsibility to communicate when he is ncomfortable And to follow the contract not leave in anger And it wasn t clear to me that either member of this relationship nderstood where things went wrong or adeuately apologized And the story also made a big deal about the reason why Dylan was punished which I felt was arguable an appropriate reason but also clearly an excuse for what Bryan felt was a pre planned sceneSo really this wasn t good for me at all in the BDSM story But the writing was fine and good for me at all in the BDSM story But the writing was fine and d like to see from Ms Jackso. Ce Group's Love’s Landscapes event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended for adult readers It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some readers The MM Romance Group strongly recommends that each reader review the General Information section before each story for story tags as well as for content warnings.